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RE: TECH.REV: Semantic Analyser Proposal



Some picky points.

8.  nesepi'o ... poi pilno:
        I think the {ne} needs to be {pe} to match up with the {poi}.

USES(X, Y, event:  KILLS(X, _)):
        (Really picky:)  If you really want the {ka mrudakfu pilno}
to be part of the {nu catra},  I think it ought to be bound
into the selbri with {be}:
        lo catra besepi'o lo mrudakfu
Otherwise it could just as easily be
        lo te zgike pesepi'o lo grana
        The musician who uses a stick (for walking)

14.  mi ro prenu na prami:
        I think this is

        naku zo'u mi ro prenu prami

i.e. the same as the previous example.  You need

        mi ro prenu naku prami


mi'e .i,n.