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Re: TEXT: pemci



>      lo ni fa le vi nanmu cu pinji
>      vau bancu le lakne zei linji
>      .i zmabra .i gohu
>      cu mukti .oirohu
>      le spepli be lo cmadesminji

In addition to the bugs pointed out by Goran, I would add that "go'u" is
no sumti; you want "le nu go'u" or maybe "de'u" (so either meter or rhyme
is lost).  Otherwise the poem isn't grammatical.

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