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Re: A Bulgarian spring custom
- To: John Cowan <cowan@SNARK.THYRSUS.COM>, Eric Raymond <eric@SNARK.THYRSUS.COM>, Eric Tiedemann <est@SNARK.THYRSUS.COM>
- Subject: Re: A Bulgarian spring custom
- From: CJ FINE <cbmvax!uunet!BRADFORD.AC.UK!cuvmb.cc.columbia.edu!C.J.Fine>
- Date: Mon, 2 Mar 1992 16:07:08 GMT
- In-Reply-To: <no.id>; from "Ivan A Derzhanski" at Mar 1, 92 7:57 pm
- Reply-To: CJ FINE <cbmvax!uunet!BRADFORD.AC.UK!cuvmb.cc.columbia.edu!C.J.Fine>
- Sender: Lojban list <cbmvax!uunet!CUVMA.BITNET!cuvmb.cc.columbia.edu!LOJBAN>
A lovely clear piece, Ivan. I read it through, and there were only about
four words I didn't know (haven't checked them yet).
A few comments:
> .i le'i skari pe le remna skapi
> jo'u ciblu cu sinxa fole kazyka'o ki'uledu'u da poi remna cu se flira
> lo dukse beleka blabi .a leka xunre cu cusku ledu'u da bilma
I think there's something wrong here:
.i [le'i skari pe le [remna skapi jo'u ciblu]] cu sinxa
[fole kazyka'o] ki'ule[du'u da [poi remna] cu se flira [lo dukse
bele[ka blabi] .a le[ka xunre]] ???cu cusku ledu'u da bilma
I can't find anything for that "cu cusku" to attach to. Perhaps you need
another "lenu" before "da poi remna"?
> ni'o zu'i dasni la'ezoiby. MARtenitsa by. ji'elenu viska lo cipnkikonia
Be careful. "ji'e" has no idea of time in it. "ca'olepu'inu viska" might
be better (if "pu'i" is the anticipative - I'm not sure) or more
prosaically "pujenaicalemu'i viska".
co'omi'e kolin
c.j.fine@bradford.ac.uk